Using my previous idea, whereby the child is playing with things that symbolise pressure, we have decided to modify the ending to give a more hard hitting narrative that is more suited to the project.
After everything explodes, such as the kettle and timer, we thought it would be better if the child that is playing with the dominoes hits them all over to present dominoes falling, then the camera cuts to the antagonist going to hit the protagonist, then the camera cuts back to the line of the dominoes falling as if the antagonists hand is moving simultaneously to the dominoes. The the last shot is of the protagonist falling to the ground as the last domino falls. The final sound will be of the last domino falling then silence to suggest the end as all the other utilities such as the kettle die down again to show the anti- climax.
However, i also thought it would be a nice touch to have a shot of the woman lying there slowly blinking, and looking at her child playing happily as the sound of the child's voice slowly fades away.
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